10 June 2011

Fate Saga Video Pitch version 2



Here is the second draft to the Fate Saga video pitch. The dialogue should be much shorter and more cohesive now, and I also tried to make myself sound more exciting. I need to re-record all of the narrative again because sometimes there's a change in my voice that is jarring, and also the hum of the air conditioner can be heard through some of it. I'm also designing a Fate Saga t-shirt and am going to change the location of the beginning and ending sequences, but I need to do a little preparation and set-dressing for it. The next version will be ready by next Thursday.

In the meantime, how does the new version look/sound?

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